Saturday, November 21, 2009

viscom: line two mark

first iteration of line two's new mark.

1 comment:

  1. Good, the formal qualities do appear comparable to your other two shapes.

    Edit out that top "mass" - it's distracting.

    The haiku line is active - whereas this shape is more passive. In order to best communicate that sense of exclamation(!), try out a few different orientations of the shape on the page, as well as adjusting the placement and orientation of the some components.

    Translate to digital!

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