Good, the formal qualities do appear comparable to your other two shapes.
Edit out that top "mass" - it's distracting.
The haiku line is active - whereas this shape is more passive. In order to best communicate that sense of exclamation(!), try out a few different orientations of the shape on the page, as well as adjusting the placement and orientation of the some components.
Good, the formal qualities do appear comparable to your other two shapes.
ReplyDeleteEdit out that top "mass" - it's distracting.
The haiku line is active - whereas this shape is more passive. In order to best communicate that sense of exclamation(!), try out a few different orientations of the shape on the page, as well as adjusting the placement and orientation of the some components.
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